Molten gold
Trickles down the skin
Of a Mughal Empress.
The first shot of
Camel-milk tea
On the cool, sandy sea.
The Bhairab swells
To a crest
And then recedes.
Unseen hands wiping
Sleep from my eyes,
In one loving caress.
Green fingers
Tremble and reach out
To the life-giving Light.
Dawn.
Though this sounds a little presumptous, I dedicate this to T. S. Eliot, whose aftereffects compelled me to put pen to paper. Also, his influence is easily discernible in the title of the poem which is not all deliberately chosen. Believe it or not, I was actually thinking of calling it: What The Dawn Said. Too much of Eliot. I need some fresh (Blandings) air.
2 comments:
we both need it. fresh air, i mean.
i dunno if i should post the last part of the stranger thing.
keep writing.
Excellent. Quite the delight of the mind's eye.
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